Wednesday, October 14, 2009

! Sweetest Sin Comments

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On skimpy see-through gown,
Dressed in fashion; wraps to moonlit passion,
to play the sweetest surrender of one’s flesh………
to grow beyond the desires of sexual fantasies………
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Sugar and Spice
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 October 2009

became a slave to taste the rewards of the sweetest sin.......it is thoughts of differentschool and onemust rememebr inlife that it is biggest moment in life whenu sharethe sentiments withfull knowlege....it ishappiest momentandhas God's blessings too..onemust take it as sacred happening inlife...love to read ur creation as it tastes nice in thought.....10

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Brenda Arroyo 14 October 2009

Sexualy lustful, yet short and tactful.

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Eyan Desir 14 October 2009

I like this because it keep my mind thinking i think this poem is nice because you didnt explain the poem fully leaving lots of room to ponder I love this

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