Friday, September 5, 2014

Sweven Comments

Rating: 4.3

Once some travelers on the road
to a land of treasure, slowed,
halting in their journey's pace
halfway to that distant place.
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Harley White
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Michael Walkerjohn 21 July 2020

Aloha and Cheers Harley! Ah... the complexities of self abound... across the generations and through forgotten centuries... " existence" , " interdependence" , " cause and effect" ... " eternal silence" that uncharacteristically inhumane treasure... yet onward we go... chasing sweven heaven's... All of the best from this life, to you, and to all of our relations... Michaelw1two

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Harley White 23 July 2020

Indeed this poem was inspired by a profound parable, which is mentioned in the notes. I'm gratified that you picked up on the various nuances I hoped to convey. Thank you for commenting!

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