Saturday, February 18, 2012

Swollen.... Comments

Rating: 5.0

he staggered a little
as he walked against the cold.
he was an old man, his hair long,
his beard unkept.
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Eric Cockrell
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Patti Masterman 19 February 2012

Wow, what a thrilling scene..you are also good at this kind of writing :) (not surprised)

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