Thursday, May 10, 2012

Symmetry Comments

Rating: 4.0

I've a promise of a future
laced with elongated vowels
and sprinkled with white flurries
crystallized in late December air.
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Gabrielle Martin
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Sajit Nair 11 May 2012

A good flow in the thoughts.. A Poem about certain feelings that we all have gone through at some point or the other.. Expectations.. and the end result.. Good choice of words....

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Pranab K Chakraborty 10 May 2012

Yes, matched but not repeated. I've a promise of a future laced with elongated vowels....perspective is unique. Nice word choice.

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