Syracuse Poem by Barry Van Allen

Syracuse



That day long past,
was overcast,
the snow made white the ground,
that silent city held no pity,
for feelings underground.

I sat there in that quiet,
thinking dreams of her,
the life we had,
mistakes we made,
within a sober blur.

I told myself to do it right,
to give her all of me,
because in that town without her,
it was easier to see.

I vowed to love her better,
I prayed I was in time,
so there I sat without her,
I now understood my crimes.

The days grew ever longer,
my convictions ever stronger,
perhaps my friend was right,
when he said the other night,
that I must change and rearrange,
if I am going to win this fight.

The journey home was positive,
my feelings now correct,
but, when I got home,
I came to know ,
the results of my neglect.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chris Mendros 15 July 2007

Regret, pain, loneliness, it all comes thru loud in clear, in this very quiet poem. Nice work.

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