Takiyah Penny

Rookie (Saint Louis, Missouri)

Take It Serious - Poem by Takiyah Penny

do you ever feel like its you against the world
like everything you do is never good enough, you try and try
but it doesnt matter if you try your best, cause thats never good enough
its always their way or no way at all
you just wish you had that one person to talk to that would actually understand, like thay have on t.v.
that one person that doesnt judge you, but actually listens
you feel like you should just breakdown and cry in front of any and everybody
i do but unlike you, i have people i could talk to, a lot actually, but just no one that would listen, or even care so, im left alone, having thought of killing MYself, cause everybody else just by and said; oh she just having an off day
when everyday is my off day so when i jump, pull the trigger, or slice MY throat, dont feel sorry then, because i felt i should take my life because it always, AL-WAYS takes someone dying in order for someone to take it serious so people, when you see a person, because you never know whats going through that persons heads

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  • Vipins Puthooran (10/25/2011 2:18:00 PM)

    I like this poem, I know that pain that flowing through your heart, ,
    We cannot judge people at first sight and what they're thinking of us..
    An excellent poem! ! good write....
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 25, 2011

Poem Edited: Wednesday, October 26, 2011

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