Take Me Poem by Green Eyes

Take Me



PLease take me from this world
Please my love take me from this world
Its not the world, we could live in it

Please take me for any where
I wanna go with you to any place
Just with you

Baby you have all my heart and my heart in your hand
so lets be hand in hand and run away from this world

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Elysabeth Faslund 27 April 2007

What an emotional impact this poem has! You have superbly gotten your desperation and depression? across bigtime. You took a common theme and brought new feelings and the arrangement of words into it, making a common theme new and heartfelt! Great. Let's see more of this newness...it is refreshing...

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