Green Eyes

Rookie (31/8/1990 / Palestine)

Dream - Poem by Green Eyes

Dream
I just close my eyes and put my hand on my heart
To remember you..... to remember your smile
Trying to see your face in my dream

Dream... Dream is just dream not real like i want... like my heart wants

Its so hard to live without you but its
The time that i must keep on trying

Trying to keep your face in my eyes and near of my heart

Today i saw you
I hold you
I kissed you and you kissed me
Im happy and unhappy in the same time

Cos all that in my dream.... just in my dream

Oh how i miss you
How im longing to see your green eyes
Longing to see your smiling face
And longing to take your kisses

I just can say that my love for you is still alive in my heart
Now and forever


Comments about Dream by Green Eyes

  • (5/7/2007 5:31:00 AM)


    you know whats good about your poems that there is a innocecy in to it....keep writing (Report) Reply

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  • (1/10/2007 6:52:00 PM)


    i really love dis poem u really but your thoughts and emotions n dis poem. its hot really it blew me off to the block. great job (Report) Reply

  • (8/18/2006 12:59:00 PM)


    Family is everything. Shane (Report) Reply

  • (8/7/2006 6:26:00 AM)


    hey i really liked this poem reminds me of a special person i once loved

    i love it! : D xXx
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  • (8/5/2006 7:41:00 PM)


    really i wrote this poem to my brother
    bc i lived with him all my life and i love him so much
    but he travelled to another country
    so i cant see him
    but he s always in my heart
    and in my dream
    (Report) Reply

  • (8/5/2006 7:38:00 PM)


    This feel like true love, what lovely honesty! ! !
    Uriah
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  • (8/5/2006 6:57:00 PM)


    There is something in this line that is so moving, hard for me to define
    The poem complete is beautiful also
    Well done
    Love duncan X
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 5, 2006

Poem Edited: Monday, August 23, 2010


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