Tuesday, July 5, 2016

Take Me Back Comments

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Take Me back to  that time
when i was first introduced to fun
I was young
only seventeen
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xihluke mlangeni
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Chinedu Dike 05 July 2016

Lovely piece of poetry that portrays the ugly consequent of juvenile deliquency - 'a had I known? ' Question that oppresses one later in life, well articulated and nicely penned in good diction with conviction. Thanks for sharing Xihluke. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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