Taken Amiss Poem by Tragic Soul

Taken Amiss

Rating: 5.0


Gone again what a waste

never again too bitter a taste

Two people sharing the same fate

who couldn't learn to communicate

A time for war a time for peace

seems the latter was never reached

Closer than atoms unable to part

the split will surely rend the heart

The spilling staining as red dye

Without looking back I say goodbye

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eyan Desir 19 November 2009

Very very nice good job....

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