Tuesday, July 21, 2009

' ' ' 'Talking In Ripples(For Helen) Comments

Rating: 2.6

In the park
we surround our pond

as if the numbers
...
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Dónall Dempsey
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Sid John Gardner. 27 July 2009

A novel concept from a very 'different but original going on unique' poet. Sid.

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Original Unknown Girl 22 July 2009

Donall, you write the most beautiful poetry. Not sure if this is for me or another H but whatever I shall say it is just peachy (gosh where did that come from?) Have I turned American? ? ? anyway, I just love love love the final lines, most beautiful, have often wanted to put those ripples into a poem myself but nothing ever quite made the grade. Yours does. HG: -) xx

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Dónall Dempsey

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Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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