Thursday, November 2, 2017

Tangled Comments

Rating: 4.3

Perhaps it the way she smiled,
The way she curled her lips when she laughed
The cringles in her eyes when she was being crazy
The way her glare was always lazy
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Subhas Chandra Chakra 05 November 2017

She was the forbidden fruit Or maybe the serpent With her all reason went away Wow, beautiful poem so nicely crafted. 10+++ for the sharing.

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Ja Ja 02 November 2017

Oh what a tangled web you weave. A relationship neither wishes to leave. Something fresh, hot and new. But not a thing, we all can do. Thank you kindly for the thought

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Lewis Mastermindpoet 03 November 2017

You're welcome and thanks

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Bernard F. Asuncion 02 November 2017

Such an interesting write.....10+++++++

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Lewis Mastermindpoet 03 November 2017

Thanks

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