Tangled Poem by rimjhim singh

Tangled

Rating: 5.0


Rhymed were our lives from the start,
But our ignorance made it fall apart.
Now riven we tread on these lost sands.
Missing parts of us, yet we stand.
Blames were all we had all our lives
Because lost were we, in dead-end ties.
Placed before each other at last...
We fit together like a statue and its cast.
And the rest is forgotten for a song.
Our rhymes mearge together and lyrics form.
And now is our start, beginning a new start,
So tangled we are that you cant tell us apart.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 10 July 2011

Marvellous poem written with great skill. Rich in imagery and emotions. I liked and rated it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'ABORTION' on page 4.

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