Tanka: Timeless Beauty Poem by David Wood

Tanka: Timeless Beauty

Rating: 5.0


A beautiful sight
Is watching her pony tail
Swish from side to side
As she walks in front of me
It puts a smile on my face

Monday, December 5, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: affinity and love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Her blonde ponytail is a timeless beauty, it floats my boat every time I see her. A Tanka, Japanese for short poem, consists of 5 lines of 5,7,5,7,7 syllables
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pallab Chaudhury 05 December 2022

As if I've heard the soft sound out of swish... nice imagery! well done.

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David Wood 05 December 2022

I've changed it again to swing, though swish mire poetical.

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