Monday, December 5, 2022

Tanka: Timeless Beauty Comments

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A beautiful sight
Is watching her pony tail
Swish from side to side
As she walks in front of me
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David Wood
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Pallab Chaudhury 05 December 2022

As if I've heard the soft sound out of swish... nice imagery! well done.

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David Wood 05 December 2022

I've changed it again to swing, though swish mire poetical.

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