Taste Poem by Joan Hart

Taste

Rating: 5.0


You devoured me
Your teeth sinking in, sharp
Like needles
Ripping my flesh
Quickly,
Messy.
Swallowing the jagged scraps
Whole -
Untasted,
Unchewed.
Until
There was nothing left,
Until
You had your fill.
Then you looked up hungrily,
Desire dancing
In the black beads of your eyes,
A greedy plea
For more

You ate
To fill.
For nothing more
Than the act of chewing,
Of swallowing.
Not for the taste
No, you never stopped
To taste.
I may as well been
A plate of meat,
Raw and faceless
Sitting in your stomach
A dumb weight
You carried around

I reject such an existence;
Even though you never noticed
Ravage animal that you were -

I Taste.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carl Harris 26 March 2009

Wow! There is a surreal quality about this poem that makes it very appealing, Caroline. There also seems to be a lot of anger in this write as well, overtones all through it, as if you are writing about a failed realationship with someone who did not meet your expectations or who perhaps used you to satisfy their own greedy desires. But it is the quality of the write that in the end makes it an exceptionally good and memorable one. You are a very gifted poet. Carl.

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