Thursday, January 2, 2003

Teach The Children Comments

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It's a blessing to teach our children, in life that's how they grow.
The things they see in life are pictures of some things they should know.
When given your baby at birth you should train yourself to be
As close to perfect in living you're a parent now, with a family.
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Michael Rhoden 07 September 2012

Excellent themes, use shorter lines unless you want very free verse, since about teachings maybe more discipline in meter. countered with playful meters, not much ABABA form if so? ? ?

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Michael Rhoden 07 September 2012

Excellent thoughts, just make the flow smoother and cut out a, an, and the's etc to trucate but sont stilt

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