Tears Poem by lost soul

Tears

Rating: 5.0


They flow down in silent streams
Showing the dense pain
They let others see that I am weak
Is that bad?
Is having people help you okay?
Aren't I supposed to help them?
Not the other way around?
These questions flow through my head,
Aching i look through the water
To see many people I help
Looking at me this bad.
It makes me feel worse.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wednesday Wood 04 March 2008

love the poem. Your not lost. Just look on to your friends and you will see they are as weak as you and everyone keeps each other strong

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Roger Cornish 10 February 2008

Sometime sweet melancoly is best? Great poem.

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