Thursday, December 14, 2017

Tears On A Desert Spring Comments

Rating: 5.0

You told the oceans to calm
you told my spirit to move
And in the labyrinth of thoughts where I had wandered so long
Knew I belonged to you
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James Long II
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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 December 2017

Ocean is told to be calm and spirits are told to move in love and sadness we do not need more in life as this provokes thought. An amazing poem is brilliantly penned.10

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