Monday, October 22, 2007

Tears That Fall Like Raindrops Comments

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With tears that fall like raindrops,
that tap against my windowpane.
I sit here with a broken heart,
wondering if it will ever mend again.
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David Harris
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Marilyn Lott 13 January 2008

Sometimes we have to turn the page to a fresh new chapter. Not always easy of, course, as a broken heart is so difficult. I guess most of us have been there sometime in our lives. If this is your life, I hope you can make that transition, David! God bless! Marilyn

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Meggie Gultiano 22 October 2007

In the meantime, life marches on..... I view this poem a sad one, , but after all, there is a stinge of hope for the better..well, David, life must go on.. i love this, it really touches my heart, questioning, waiting for a reply...and at the same time, hoping.. thanks David...thank you for this sharing.. hugs, Meggie

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 22 October 2007

A sad poem David, not real life I hope my friend...10

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