Tuesday, December 2, 2008

***tell Me, , I Will Not Cry! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Comments

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I will not cry, just wanna know about your past, so tell me
Tell me have you ever loved a woman?
Did she love you? did she call you 'my man'?
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negar shahnouri
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Gold Trybes 15 September 2011

Lovely poem..definately a keeper for me

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 04 December 2008

Creating a sense of interaction through the employment of direct questions to the Reader...is an old and wise poetic stradegy...This querious style, stimulates the Readrer's intrigue, and generates involuntary reaction, albeit through the mind's-eye, as at one time or another, haven't we have all mused about such questions when we are in love..., or directed such questions at they whom we love, from our heart's human need, at times, for re-assurance...? In addition, and probably most importantly, this style generates an air that enables the Reader to consider themself an active participant in your work, as they reel off their own personal responses to each of your queries, in their mind. I like this piece...it smacks of originality & reality! Solid Penning, Negar! ~ FjR ~

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Tom Balch 02 December 2008

A very well crafted piece, regards Tom

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Blue Eyes 02 December 2008

this poem can be listed under the banner of modern poetry and its a good thing coz many people are imitative.great work.

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Such a great poem perfectly written great work Krista

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