TERRORIST: BEWARE
Melvin Banggollay
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Your natural adroitness towards clean, crisp & rhythmic structure...is very present here.Your storyline speaks truth...sad truth...and your delivery, powerful & reader-impacting.Excellent Work, my friend. ~ FjR ~ ..2008..
For a normal human and a sensitive poet this is difficult to understand why people go so inhuman and cruel…The heart rendering sights of the bloodshed of my city will never be forgotten, so many orphaned, widowed, childless… Your lines depict the terror and it is sure that they will never be spared by God… Abha
terrorist create terror and they 're means out of nothing.fighting out of crazy minds. simply they're just out of their minds. nice write melvin.
well done melvin.......very enchanting but with powerful messages.damned to the terrorist. hail peace.MAKE LOVE NOT WAR!
its a fantastic piece of work, except all you have said is too true. its so sad...