I have already been what i'll never be again..
and in new found clarity i see a beginning in our end.
i pay homage to a time
between before and hence
-a merge of entities..
the possibility of an us
mistakenly left to chance..
i bid you farewell
and set my self free..
Offers hope to the hopeless. Ah beautiful thoughts, beautifully put.
Wonderful poem, so self contained, every comment I think to make on your subject seems to already be a part of the poem. Embrace your freedom :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Dear Adele le Keur, you wrote a well crafted poem. The phrase 'a beginning in our end' spreads the seed of hope. I give it a 9+. You are a talent. Enrich it. Give us more. You can go higher and higher. Joseph Josephides Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) Int.Lib.Poetry awarded