Friday, June 17, 2011

That Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

I had a dream last night,
and you were there.
The look in your eyes,
the warm of the air.
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Katie Champeau
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 17 June 2011

This is really a nice work. I like it for its vivid imagery and skilful description. Lots of love. A fine 10. If you don't mind, pleas read and rate my poem 'A busy street on page 1.

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