Saturday, June 4, 2011

The Alien Worm Comments

Rating: 5.0

The Goldfish coughed up a cricket,
The Cricket coughed up a worm.
The Worm stood on the edge of the glass aquarium,
It was very long and stood straight up in vertical form.
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 04 June 2011

Great poem with wonderful vivid imagery. I liked the poem for its strong structure. I rate it 10. TFS. Please read and rate my poem 'A farmer' on page 1.

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