Thursday, January 2, 2003

The Baby's Cry Comments

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A baby boy was born
In a maternity hospital
He cried before opening his eyes
To show that he's alive
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Minh-Vien
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Miss Starrbox 24 April 2007

Wow. Very powerful words and very true too. I liked your poem alot. -Evelyn- :)

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