Saturday, May 12, 2018

The Battle Of Life And Death Comments

Rating: 4.5

I may not act like I'm torn apart
Inside my heart and mind has fallen apart
But that's the beauty of the art
The blood and the pain don't show in the dark
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Brandon Rauls
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Bonaventure Onuabuchi 11 April 2019

Wow man, seems we live in the same kind of world. Feel your pains same way I am feeling mine right now. This is a great piece, with every line depicting the message of an attempt of suicide. I do enjoy, and seek the right to post this on my Facebook page!

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Alison mujati 12 May 2018

A good start....you may like my new poem too missed call

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