The Beach Poem by 5 6A Swan Hill North Primary School

The Beach

Rating: 4.0


Scampering crabs nipping at my feet
Rickety jetty swaying with the waves
Slimy fish biting at fishing lines
Salty waves dissolving all the sand
Enthusiastic scuba-divers searching for aquatic life
Grouping plankton growing for survival
Cheerful surfers gliding across crashing waves
Blazing sun providing people tans

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lyn Paul 19 June 2013

Great work. Sounds like the best beach. What a wonderful teacher you have too.

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