Thursday, June 6, 2013

The Beach Comments

Rating: 4.0

Scampering crabs nipping at my feet
Rickety jetty swaying with the waves
Slimy fish biting at fishing lines
Salty waves dissolving all the sand
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5 6A Swan Hill North Primary School
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Lyn Paul 19 June 2013

Great work. Sounds like the best beach. What a wonderful teacher you have too.

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