Tuesday, June 19, 2007

The Beast Within Comments

Rating: 4.7

In all of us, a beast lays waiting,
in the dark part of our soul.
It waits in the shadows
to blacken out heart,
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David Harris
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Not a member No 6 19 June 2007

Must be the season of the beast. I've just written Restless River on a very similar theme! l Enjoyed this different perspective.

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Marci Made 19 June 2007

I don't want this beast in me, , , , I'd rather it be the spirit of a kind soul and loving one that is able to overcome this dreadful beast you write of, which is one of the reasons that this journey we are on is called 'earth' and not 'heaven.'..well thought out write.....Let the caged beast free say I, gone from one and all.....marci.xo

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Soul Writer 19 June 2007

Your Poem has the same title as mine and the same feeling and story, very interesting to see different conceptions. Read mine and see the similarities

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 19 June 2007

The the beast is in each and every one of us...Sad to say not all can keep it under caged...10

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