Eli MorenoDrew

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The Beatles

Poem by Eli MorenoDrew

I’ve come to realize
That the Beatles are an
Over-rated British band
Without you singing along with them

And when I kiss you
I feel happy, inside.
Hm-hm-hm-hm-hm…

You laugh at my absent mind,
I laugh at the face you just made.

I wanna hold your
Haa-a-a-a-nd

You sing making sure to remember every note
As if they were the letters of your name.
I just stared at you.

What?
Nothing.
What are you staring at?
You.
Oh, just checking.
I love you.
Hehe, I love you too.
Good, just checking.


Comments about The Beatles by Eli MorenoDrew

  • Michael Dayton (3/16/2008 2:39:00 AM)

    Great conversational poem. Especially since its about the greatest band in existence.(Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, November 24, 2007

Poem Edited: Tuesday, April 26, 2011