The Beauty Of A Frown Poem by Levi smith

The Beauty Of A Frown

Rating: 5.0


a smile is so common, so boring
i dont understand why everyone likes a smile
a frown paints a picture of a persons true feelings
their thoughts, there emotions
smiles are overated
to me a frown is beautiful

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Meghan - 29 June 2006

I love this. Very well said, it's good to see that you appreciate what's different. Great job. Meghan

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Leigh A. Hill 29 June 2006

I like the originality in your writing! sometimes its just good to see someone NOT faking it eh? mmhmm. love starr

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INTERESTING THEORY, THAT I THINK WILL CHANGE AS YOU GROW OLDER, LOOK IN THE MIRROR AND SEE WHAT FROWNING HAS DONE TO YOUR YOUTHFULNESS....OTHER THAN YHAT, I LIKE YOUR ABSTRACT SPIN ON A TPOIC AS SIMPLE AS A SMILE...INNOVATIVE& CLEVER, LEVI. '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''~F. J. R.~''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''

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