as i think of you
and the time
we no longer
keep
together
i stumble
precipitously
through
each
morning
constantly
dogged
by
the bed unmade.
(8-05-2003)
Abandoned Temple Love Sheets a dark depression love lost haunting loneliness left each morning waking to empty haunting bed left abandoned unmade cold sheets grief lost left never feels again covers gone lover's body which silent left plan day preparation packed or terminal sudden night departed never again graces abandoned love temple sheets Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'The Bed Unmade by Kyle Schlicher. Dedicated to the poet Kyle Schlicher.
a dark depression of love lost haunting loneliness left, exquisite :) 10+
nicely penned, Kyle. I couldn't say if it can celebrate Women's Day at best ;) - but surely it's a very good poem, indeed. Thanks for sharing
Nice piece of work used simple poetic words. It is an excellent poem!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Nice piece of work used simple poetic words. Excellent poem.