The Bed Unmade Poem by Kyle Schlicher

The Bed Unmade

Rating: 4.3


as i think of you
and the time
we no longer
keep
together
i stumble
precipitously
through
each
morning
constantly
dogged
by
the bed unmade.


(8-05-2003)

Sunday, March 8, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: alone
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rishad Mk 08 March 2015

Nice piece of work used simple poetic words. Excellent poem.

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Terry Craddock 07 December 2015

Abandoned Temple Love Sheets a dark depression love lost haunting loneliness left each morning waking to empty haunting bed left abandoned unmade cold sheets grief lost left never feels again covers gone lover's body which silent left plan day preparation packed or terminal sudden night departed never again graces abandoned love temple sheets Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'The Bed Unmade by Kyle Schlicher. Dedicated to the poet Kyle Schlicher.

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Terry Craddock 21 September 2015

a dark depression of love lost haunting loneliness left, exquisite :) 10+

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Fabrizio Frosini 08 March 2015

nicely penned, Kyle. I couldn't say if it can celebrate Women's Day at best ;) - but surely it's a very good poem, indeed. Thanks for sharing

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Rishad Mk 08 March 2015

Excellent poem! Used simple poetic words.

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Rishad Mk 08 March 2015

Nice piece of work used simple poetic words. It is an excellent poem!

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