Rene BalugTinquilan

Rene BalugTinquilan

Baganga, Davao Oriental, Philippines
Tuesday, August 27, 2013

The Bent Rose Comments

Rating: 5.0

There's nothing more splendid to see
Than to a rose growing happily
In the garden of beauties he stay
And live his life without misery
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Rene BalugTinquilan
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Bri Edwards 27 September 2013

there is some evidence here that english is not your first language. (i may be wrong, and i don't downgrade you for it. i'm glad so many poets use english. otherwise i could not read the words!) i liked the story and your telling of it. and i liked what rhymes there were. i score it good. thanks for sharing. :)

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Rene BalugTinquilan

Rene BalugTinquilan

Baganga, Davao Oriental, Philippines
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