Friday, June 12, 2015

The Bird Who Dared To Fly Comments

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At the crack of dawn, the time of tides,
Amidst the trees, a little bird resides.
Flies with her flock and then back to her nest,
But all of this was never enough, she had a spark of zest.
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Vani Agarwal
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Rajnish Manga 25 April 2017

A gripping narrative involving a small bird, leaving its nest and venturing out to explore this vast expanse. Nicely articulated. Thanks. You have got a vision. All the best. And she realized.... She was in the real world. In the world's trap of love, hatred, beauty, reality and fraud.

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Vani Agarwal 30 April 2017

Thank you sir! You have been very kind and encouraging.

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