///The Blocked Lane Poem by akram saqib

///The Blocked Lane

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O my love
O my love
Let us seek
A thing unique
embrace the sky
with emotions high
should become one
with the shining sun
with love feather
let, s rise together
world should praise
emanating love rays
keep me in touch
with you very much
don, t turn your face
enhance my grace
o my love
o my love
the world is filled
and is chilled
with extreme jealousy
freedom is a fallacy
try to mitigate
the pain in the fate
of the modern man
in the blocked lane

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the world is filled and is chilled with extreme jealousy freedom is a fallacy try to mitigate the pain in the fate of the modern man in the blocked lane........ we live amidst jealousy and hate... it is truth and well explained here

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John Lyday 01 June 2009

Nice love poem. 'With love feather let's rise together.' good lines here.

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