“piece” Of Mind - Poem by akram saqib

Dr.tony Brahmin (8/9/2017 4:40:00 PM)

Invent devices loving and kind
Just by using a “piece” of mind..such a great message indeed my dear poet.
yes we waste our energy in inventing and we destroy............. thank you for this great message. it is very true in todays context. tony (Report) Reply

Rabia Butt (12/10/2011 2:16:00 AM)

nice poem thought is very unique (Report) Reply

Fade Ward (6/12/2009 7:19:00 AM)

Dear Akram, A good message through a beautiful poem, very relevant in these strife-torn times piece be with you




give u ten for that one (Report) Reply

AtreyaSarma Uppaluri (4/29/2009 8:37:00 PM)

Dear Akram, A good message through a beautiful poem, very relevant in these strife-torn times. Yes, unless man learns to heed the call of his heart and soul, his exercise of mind for inventions and discoveries, sans an ethical base and an ethos of humanity, carries him nowhere except on a path of doom. Love, my dear friend. (Report) Reply

Silent Speaker (4/28/2009 2:10:00 PM)

I love how this poem is so different. Its so unique and distinctive. Well done! ! ! (Report) Reply

Sarah Childers (4/27/2009 7:10:00 PM)

I thought that it was very good and very clever. I am not big on rhyming in my poetry, but hey whatever works for you. It was a wonderful piece and I cannot wait to read more. Keep up the good work!

~Cheers (Report) Reply

Shirin Sheikhi (4/10/2009 2:46:00 PM)

so much close to one of my poems unpoblihsed in poem hunter

missing needs for consolation treats
disregarding facts to be discreet
losing sense for the sound of hearts when break

thats great to think of world issues this much deeply
best of my wishes (Report) Reply

Metin Sahin (4/10/2009 11:00:00 AM)

wonderful.go on in this way.but be free in verse..write from yoı ur inside (Report) Reply

shreedhar.Shree Bangalore, INDIA (3/29/2009 12:19:00 PM)

Nice compostion dear friend :)

yes, the huiman race is much on the destructive course,
and less on the GROWTH one;
though the latter one contributes
Infinitely to the UNIVERSAL PEACE.

- shree (Report) Reply

~ Jon London ~ (3/26/2009 1:26:00 PM)

Peaceful lines spoken with soft tones brings to mind an overwhelming feeling of peace my brother, excellent piece 10 keep up the good work Bravo! ! (Report) Reply

Aijaz Asif (3/23/2009 5:27:00 AM)

if only we start using our piece of mind in a positive thoughts tahn there will be a peace in this world...a very good and thought provoking write, thanks for sharing 10+++

rgds
asif (Report) Reply

Anjali Sinha (3/21/2009 12:02:00 AM)

wowwwwwwwwwww
i liked your 'piece of mind'
-10 anjali (Report) Reply