Saturday, February 20, 2016

The Blue Lagoon Comments

Rating: 5.0

TIRED of the flowers' voluptuous whispering,
Nonnoune and Louisy with mixed curls hold
Each other's hand, he pale bronze, she browned gold,
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John Antoine Nau
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Chinedu Dike 06 March 2016

Beautiful romantic love poem, well articulated and insightfully penned in good rhyme scheme with conviction. Lovely poem elegantly written in poetic diction. Thanks for sharing.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 20 February 2016

Beautiful poem with rhyme and style. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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John Antoine Nau

John Antoine Nau

San Francisco, California
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