Thursday, November 16, 2017

The Box Comments

Rating: 5.0

I have a box, as big enough as me.
A little brown, a little blue.
A little worn out, strange looking box.
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Mostafa Didar
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Jazib Kamalvi 18 November 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Mostafa. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Mostafa Didar 18 November 2017

Thanks Jazib. Will definitely give it a read.

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Juaria Iqbal 17 November 2017

The description of The Box and the imagery is beautifully put together. Keep up the good work.

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Mostafa Didar 18 November 2017

Thanks Juaria.

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Chinedu Dike 16 November 2017

Work of an active imagination. Beautiful piece of poetry with powerful message, well articulated and elegantly penned in good poetic diction with conviction. A poignant write Mostata. Thanks for sharing and do remain blessed.

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Mostafa Didar 17 November 2017

Thank you Chinedu for the inspirational words. Remain Blessed.

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