Saturday, August 5, 2006

The Boy Comments

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The boy watched from a distance
At the group outside his home
He wanted to, be with them
Not be here alone
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dianne anderson
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Gabriella Franco 06 August 2006

Wonderfully done. I wasn't sure where it was goung, so that was great. Way to walk in someone's shoes, darlin'! Gabriela

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Patricia Gale 05 August 2006

You have looked inside another's pain so well. Wonderfuly done.

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