Thursday, July 5, 2018

The Boy And His Umbrella Comments

Rating: 5.0

There was a little boy who loved his umbrella

It was his only love since there was no one for this fella
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Sujan Azad Parikh
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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 July 2018

The Boy's intense love for his umbrella is beautifully depicted in this poem! I find tremendous creativity in you! Keep it up! Go on penning my friend...you will see an automatic upward graph! I vote it with a 10

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Sujan Azad Parikh 10 July 2018

Thanks a lot Dr Dillip K Swain for your confidence in me...Your poems are truly great.

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Robert Murray Smith 05 July 2018

Enjoyed this poem. A good little write about a boy's plight.++10

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Sujan Azad Parikh 06 July 2018

Thank you Robert that you enjoyed my poem...I'm just starting out so, a little bit nervous. Your appreciation gives me a lot of confidence.

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Dr Antony Theodore 05 July 2018

So, he took his umbrella and gave it to the little one A huge smile came on the boy's face And it was again a day of joy and enjoyment..... best friend umbrella. his tears and the joy when a man gave him umbrella.......... giving joy to the others. this poem has a great spiritual content..... selflessness. thank u. tony

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Sujan Azad Parikh 06 July 2018

Thank you Tony that you enjoyed my poem...bit nervous since just started writing poems.

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Sujan Azad Parikh 06 July 2018

Thanks a lot.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 05 July 2018

Sujan, such a great wtite...10++++

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Sujan Azad Parikh 06 July 2018

Thank you very much Bernard.

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