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The Boy Wit The Crush! ! !

Rating: 4.7

THERE WAS A BOY
WHO HAD A CRUSH ON A GURL

WHO WAS 14
BUT HE DIDNT NO WAT TO DO

SO HE SAID
SHOULD I TLK TO HER

OR

SHOULD I JUS KISS HER
BUT THEN HE DECIDED TO TLK TO HER

SO TTHEY TLKED

BOY-HII
GURL-HI

BOY-WAT R U DOIN
GURL-NUTTIN

BOY-DO U HAVE A BOYFRIEND
GURL-NO

BOY-DO U WANT ONE
GURL-HE HAS TO BE NICE AND SWEET AND NOT SHADY

BOY-DO U LIKE ME
GURL-NOT REALLY

BOY-OHH OK
GURL-R U MAD

BOY-NO
GURL-OK

THEN HE LEFT
AND WENT HOME

AND FOUND A GUN IN HIS DADS DRAW
THEN BEFORE HE DIED HE SAID

'GOD LET ME DIE FAST AND EASY'
THEN HE HEARD A VOICE THAT SOUNDED LIKE GOD

GOD-DONT DO IT IT IS NOT WORTH IT
BOY-YES IT IS SHE DONT LOVE ME

GOD-YES SHE DOES
BOY DROPS THE GUN AND SAYS

'HOW DO U NO'
GOD-BECAUSE IM GOD

AND FADED AWAY

BUT THE BOY DID NOT BELIEVE IT

SO HE PICKED UP THE GUN AND
HEARD A VOICE AGAIN AND SAID

STOP LIENG TO ME AND SHOT THE GUN AT THE VOICE
BUT WEN HE LLOKED HE SAW THE GURL OF HIS DREAMS DEAD

HE HAD KILLED THE GURL

AND THE GURL HAD CAME TO HIS HOUSE TO TELL HIM THAT SHE WANTED TO GO OUT WIT HIM

AND HE SAID
HOW...HOW...HOW COU...COUL....COULD...I, baby im sorry

AND THEN HIS DAD CAME IN AND SAID 'WAT HAPPENED'
AND THE BOY SAID
I...I...KILLED...HER

THEN THE BOY PICKED UP THE GUN AND KILLED HIMSELF

IF U LOVE SOME ONE SO MUCH THAT U WOULD DIE FOR THEM THEN TELL THIS TO EVERYONE, U LOVE AND CARE ABOUT! !

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Phoenix Rory 14 December 2007

If this had been written in a grammatically correct manner, I would have given it a ten. Even as it is, it touched me, and I give it a nine. -Phoenix

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