The Break-In Poem by David Welch

The Break-In



Smash of a broken lock,
whispering, they talk,
time, it seems to stop,
they're in my house,
they're inside.

Searching for some loot,
a tried and tested crew,
what damage they may do
when they find us,
they'll find us.

Footfalls of the stairs,
they think I'm unaware,
that I would never dare
come out there,
go out there.

Doors smash, they see my wife,
he brandishes a knife,
my shotgun roars to life,
he falls down
he's bleeding.

The others turn and fly,
the ringleader he lies,
looks confused as he dies…
he made his choice
...So be it.

Thursday, July 12, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: crime,narrative,night,story,suspense
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Murray Smith 12 July 2018

An intensity of feelings takes us through this poem. No warning shoot to kill. Maybe, the owner will face a court.++10

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David Welch 13 July 2018

Better to be judged by nine then killed by one...thanks for reading!

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