Thursday, July 12, 2018

The Break-In Comments

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Smash of a broken lock,
whispering, they talk,
time, it seems to stop,
they're in my house,
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David Welch
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Robert Murray Smith 12 July 2018

An intensity of feelings takes us through this poem. No warning shoot to kill. Maybe, the owner will face a court.++10

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David Welch 13 July 2018

Better to be judged by nine then killed by one...thanks for reading!

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