The Breath Poem by Lynde Manley

The Breath



The night is dark,
The room is cool.

I await the breath
That warms my soul.

My eyes close slowly
as the still is broken.

He is near
I await the breath

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lorenzo Costigliolo 20 January 2010

Interesting anticipation set by the repeated line, I await the breath... succinct mystery set in a rather cool setting anticipating the warmth of the breath... leaves the reason unstated subject to the imagination-though suggested by the ambiance.

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Lynde Manley

Lynde Manley

Little Rock, Arkansas
Close
Error Success