My Heart Breaks Poem by Lynde Manley

My Heart Breaks



Where am I to go
When the wind stops blowing?

Where will I be
When time stands still?

What will I see
When my eyes are finally open?

My heart breaks
He is gone.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjali Sinha 21 January 2010

heart breaks and he is gone will he come back is the question? ? nice poem..........

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Lorenzo Costigliolo 20 January 2010

Unexpected ending for two philosophical questions. the 'as' of the second stanza shuld be the consistent 'when' as in the first and third stanzas. The 'as' implies something else. Just a thought...

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Lynde Manley

Lynde Manley

Little Rock, Arkansas
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