The Center Of “i” Poem by Nash lenin Rodriguez

The Center Of “i”

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Can you see the struggles in my eye?
Can you break it? Or you’ll just sigh and let me die
Where should I start?
Does the things I know makes me smart?
My life that is void and dry

Even my roar reaches the sky
I wanted warmth but I am keen to fry
Is there something can cause me joy that I should not buy?
Then what is it so that I’ll cease my bray
Should I be blind to deny?

Or I’ll set my emotions and fly?
Then see the struggles in my eye
My existence beaks into pieces but why?
Maybe I am cursed with face of wry
For this I’ll just chose to die

And let my spirit soar in the sky
Is there anybody that could hear my cry?
Can you lie to stop me cry?
Will you pull me or you’ll turn around and fly?
Then tell me what’s your suggestion is in reply?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Taylor Dubay 24 November 2010

I like this one :) it feels deep and meaningfull.

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Rebekah Rogers 24 November 2010

i like where you say 'i want warmth but I'm keen to burn' to me its saying i want to be loved or maybe even heard but I'm afraid to get hurt again. i love this one keep it up.

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Nash lenin Rodriguez

Nash lenin Rodriguez

Bacolod City, Negros Occidental
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