Sunday, March 5, 2006

The Color Of Pain Comments

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If you were to paint a picture of pain,
What color would it be?
A crimson red like blood poured forth
From a wounded heart or scar of the soul?
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a nobody named maui
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Jack the Ripper 30 May 2006

This sounds like Lanston Hughes' 'Dreams Defered'.

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Laura Kelly 29 May 2006

I love this poem. I would never be able to think of something like it. Your similies and metaphors are great. I have a question for you though. Is this just a poem or do you really feel pain?

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