Saturday, June 14, 2014

The Commitment Comments

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The lesion was
spreading. From
inside, I hear the wails.
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Satish Verma
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Colleen Courtney 14 June 2014

Love the last two stanzas of this poem. First because there is nothing more beautiful than the full moon and two because of its determination to face our trials head on. Nicely done!

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Beautiful words and small lines and a nice poem.

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