Saturday, June 12, 2010

The Crow And The Dove Comments

Rating: 3.3

Cry as a dove impacting the earth
In a cruel and demented flailing
As she tries to avoid the fall...
None the less, embracing the earth
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Becca Bell
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Kesav Easwaran 13 June 2010

a beautifully written poem...love and the unintented fall from its zenith...a dove once now a crow... the penultimate lines of both stanzas are really poetic...good talent...imaginative write...10

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